Tuesday, July 27, 2010

Sometimes simple…

…is the best way;
I love you
I want you
I miss you
…is all we should say.



*Note: Visit One Stop - Where Poets and Writers Meet and their One Shot Wednesday for poems & stories from others.

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24 comments:

  1. So true! Sometimes three little words are enough (that tends to be my downfall).

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  2. Most of the time it is the best way...bravo..bkm

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  3. Simplicity is what is needed to unravel the complexities of the day. I love this poem!

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  4. Very true... and so quickly forgotten it can seem sometimes. thanks. Well written.

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  5. brilliant in its simple complexity...nicely done. thanks for linking up to oneshot again!

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  6. from my experience these do not suffice most time. nicely done. i am a simplistic but unfortunately the world isn't.

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  7. I agree wholeheartedly. simple and sweet!!!

    So glad you were here for One Shot Wednesday

    Smiles from the Moon

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  8. So true and so charmingly put

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  9. So simple yet so profoundly beautiful. Great job!

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  10. Excellent this is such a lovely thought with depth! Nicely done!

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  11. couldn't agree more..simple and to the heart..:) beautiful!

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  12. This is such powerful words with so much meaning and depth. Wonderful and thanks for sharing ~ Amanda

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  13. Nicely written. Sometimes simplicity is best.

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  14. So much wisdom in so few words. Nicely done.

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  15. Little things (including words) say a whole lot. Loved this!

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  16. The rule of teaching - say what you are going to say, say it and then say what you've said always applies to saying I love you. I do poetry for fun rather than publication so for this week only, I’ve nervously posted an example from each of my blogs: an Elegy from Scribbles and Diversions, a Gogyohka from Random Twitter Stories, and free verse poem from Random Short Stories.

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  17. I quite agree with the sentiment, JRM. Simplicity itself, and all the more elegant for it. :)

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  18. simplicity is always the answer
    especially when dealing with the heart.

    smiles,

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  19. yep - in lots of cases this few words would be enough..

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  20. and thank you ....

    Lest we forget to just be simple and child like and express our feelings with straight forward simplicity and honesty.

    Lovely,
    Joanny

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  21. less is more and is this case so very, very, much more....been away for a week so catching up and cheers for being part of one shot..Pete

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  22. short and powerful.

    Thanks for sharing.
    Happy V Day.
    A++

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  23. Hello, Thanks for the love to Poetry Potluck! You Rock!

    Awards 4 Poetry Potluck Week 22, Enjoy!

    Your contribution means a world to us, Happy Thursday!
    See you next time!
    xoxox

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