It’s cold, very cold,
snow’s falling faster than fast.
Ice is building atop the bridge,
not slower than the last.
My breath is cloudy
as it floats through the air.
My ears are red,
fingers frozen when bare.
I don’t like this feeling,
these feelings from past.
We’ve done this before;
though this seems to be our last.
My heart is breaking
yours is frozen and feisty.
Mine won’t stop aching
it seems you don’t like me.
We’ve been here before
not long in the past.
This isn’t the same though,
I know it’s our last.
Your stare is chilling,
right to the bone.
Your smile is cold,
and so is your tone.
It’s cold in here,
snow’s falling faster than fast.
Your ice starts toppling,
our bridge begins to crash.
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was it the weather or the company or both!!! a good poem to share..thanks Pete
ReplyDeletechilling verse...and captures the feeling well of when a relationship turns cold...though i could use some ice to cut the heat today. smiles. nice write. thanks for linking up to oneshot again!
ReplyDeleteMy heart is cold
ReplyDeletefor if no heat they show
I just up and go
Time is to quick
to play silly games
they can love me or leave me
to me it's the same
Reminds me of Michigan winters, as well as a relationship equally as chilling. Great poem and skilled rhyme. Thanks
ReplyDeleteI do feel a distinct chill when I read this. Very nice! :)
ReplyDeletethis seems to be a poem to a love, with the cold representing the bitterness of love.
ReplyDeletevery nice poem indeed
So true when hearts are being broken that there is a cold that cannot be warmed. Love hearing the bridge collapsing in the distance.
ReplyDeletepowerful words my friend
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Ack! Chilling! I enjoyed the way you've used the repetition of certain lines..artfully done! It really adds to the effect! Lovely (albeit sad) poem, and very well done too..
ReplyDeleteA "cool" One Shot!
loves like tat all the time..
ReplyDeleteLove is a very cold and sometimes bitter thing. Very well put in this piece, and well crafted! Great post!
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