Monday, January 24, 2011

Sin – A Haiku

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Sin, its appeal and
Its temptation unrivaled
No wonder we fall
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*Written in response to the prompt “Sin” at Haiku Heights

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Bliss /
Sacred /
Those Eyes /
absolute emptiness /
Haikus From Space /
Haikus To Save The World /

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posted 11:06 AM
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9 comments:

  1. UnknownJanuary 24, 2011 at 11:25 AM

    well put.

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  2. Linda Bob Grifins Korbetis HallJanuary 24, 2011 at 4:19 PM

    Thanks for linking...

    lovely Haiku.
    we all carry sins.

    A++

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  3. AnonymousJanuary 24, 2011 at 10:59 PM

    nice.. here's mine for this potluck.. http://fiveloaf.wordpress.com/2010/08/04/here-for-you/

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  4. AnonymousJanuary 25, 2011 at 4:52 AM

    Consequences should weigh more than the delight or there's just no fight!

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  5. AnonymousJanuary 25, 2011 at 9:59 AM

    hmmm interesting one. happy potluck!
    http://lynnaima.wordpress.com/

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  6. Vinay Leo R.January 25, 2011 at 11:37 AM

    yeah.. no wonder, JRM.. no wonder we fall!!

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  7. TeresaJanuary 25, 2011 at 6:23 PM

    Very nice. It does explain why it's so hard to resist.

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  8. AnonymousJanuary 25, 2011 at 7:43 PM

    Why is it that what we can't have we want most? Well written haiku.

    http://liv2write2day.wordpress.com/2011/01/24/boundaries-jingles-poetry-potluck/

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  9. AnonymousJanuary 29, 2011 at 5:16 AM

    How true ! Forbidden things are often tempting , no wonder why ! :)

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