A circle
Is a bent heart
Pulled and torn
Ripped at center
Hole gaping
With jagged edges
-
Only it
Knows the pain
_
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nice...this is tight and in a few words evokes much...nicely done.
ReplyDeletevery well written...love this!
ReplyDeleteI love this - even more powerful for its brevity.
ReplyDeleteBrief, but potently writ...an interesting image, that set me thinking. Brings new meaning to the old phrase "It all comes full circle"...so it is with the pain of a broken heart.
ReplyDeleteI feel this. Great write hun, brave and unadulterated
ReplyDeleteNice short poem here.
ReplyDeleteI like it!
Thank you, all. Thank you!
ReplyDeletemakes me think that lines and people may be incomplete without knowing pain that connects one, literally. Well done.
ReplyDeletegreat images constructed with few words...bkm
ReplyDeleteOUCH!!! Tight one, JRM!! And yet, too perfect for words!!
ReplyDeleteSolid imagery, taut execution, exemplary line breaks.
ReplyDeleteI am going to use this in a yoga class. giving credit to my poetic friend, of course. thank you for sharing your heart.
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