Friday, December 10, 2010

Forgiveness

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I would ask forgiveness
But it will not come

Wrap up feelings
And return to shadows

Place them on a shelf
Dusty and full

Hope for better
Another day

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posted 10:49 AM
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7 comments:

  1. BubbaDecember 10, 2010 at 11:36 AM

    I'll just go ahead and forgive ya - that way you can come back out of the shadows.

    Nice take on the prompt!

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  2. Sherry Blue SkyDecember 10, 2010 at 11:44 AM

    So well done, you say a great deal in a few short lines. Wonderful writing.

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  3. JRMDecember 10, 2010 at 11:48 AM

    Thank you :-)

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  4. Linda Bob Grifins Korbetis HallDecember 10, 2010 at 12:14 PM

    awesome take.

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  5. Brother OllieDecember 10, 2010 at 1:25 PM

    Fell the same way...most days. Nice tight poem.

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  6. Eileen T O'Neill .....December 10, 2010 at 3:49 PM

    I really like the honesty in your words, surrounding the idea of forgiveness.

    Eileen

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  7. EllaDecember 12, 2010 at 9:09 PM

    I like the refreshing way you exposed the feeling

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