Friday, December 10, 2010

Forgiveness

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I would ask forgiveness
But it will not come

Wrap up feelings
And return to shadows

Place them on a shelf
Dusty and full

Hope for better
Another day

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7 comments:

  1. I'll just go ahead and forgive ya - that way you can come back out of the shadows.

    Nice take on the prompt!

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  2. So well done, you say a great deal in a few short lines. Wonderful writing.

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  3. Fell the same way...most days. Nice tight poem.

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  4. I really like the honesty in your words, surrounding the idea of forgiveness.

    Eileen

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  5. I like the refreshing way you exposed the feeling

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